Song of the Day: Firefly
Activity of the Day: Object Writing
Alright, since everyone is here, it’s time for a hike. We set off on foot down a dirt road, following the lake’s edge.
As you take a slow, deep breath, the smell of wet leaves gently fills you. We choose randomly as we come to the first fork in the path.
You’re holdin’ on for a minute
But I know your heart ain’t in it
You will rest your wings until you fly
– Firefly
Today, we’re getting lost on purpose. As we hop from stone to stone over a gurgling brook, the sun tangles with the tree branches, and green lights begin to dance along the trail. Fireflies!
You dart after one, and then it disappears. You see another in the corner of your eye and swing your cupped hands in the air. Missed!
That’s ok, we’re going to learn to catch fireflies today 🙂
Today, we’re getting lost on purpose. As we hop from stone to stone over a gurgling brook, the sun tangles with the tree branches, and green lights begin to dance along the trail. Fireflies!
You dart after one, and then it disappears. You see another in the corner of your eye and swing your cupped hands in the air. Missed!
That’s ok, we’re going to learn to catch fireflies today 🙂
This one gets my blood pumping.
So today you get something special – a performance with all the instruments in the studio!
However you listen to music, you should be covered here…
Whether you like to stream with Soundcloud, download high quality from Google Drive, or watch on YouTube, you have it!
However you listen to music, you should be covered here…
Whether you like to stream with Soundcloud, download high quality from Google Drive, or watch on YouTube, you have it!
This is the part where you get to learn the story behind Firefly, its songwriting and lyrics, and more…
The echoes of your laughter
Are deadened by the maple trees
We run, run, run
We run into the summer breeze
You kiss me only after
We’ve sank our toes into the green
Of wet forest earth
And closed the distance in between
We tumble to the earth
Sweaty limbs so intertwined
We’re pressing back and forth
Shallow breaths in late July
You reach your hand above
And try to catch a firefly
But it’s gone, gone, gone
Gone into the night
You’re holdin’ on for a minute
But I know your heart ain’t in it
You will rest your wings until you fly
Well, You’re a firefly
I won’t catch you tonight
Kiss my fingers
With your firelight
You’re a firefly
I won’t catch you tonight
I’ll let you go
Just hold me for one minute ‘till you fly
Now you’ve packed your bags and flown away
Left me with this broken dream
You’re gone, gone, gone
But I’ve one secret I will keep
These fireflies ain’t here to stay
But they’ll rest their weary wings
Just touch your finger to their legs
They’ll land on anything
You’re holdin’ on for a minute
But I know your heart ain’t in it
You can rest your wings until you fly
Well, You’re a firefly
I won’t catch you tonight
Kiss my fingers
With your firelight
You’re a firefly
I won’t catch you tonight
I’ll let you go
Just hold me for one minute ‘till you fly
You’re a firefly
I won’t catch you tonight
Take my hand
If only for one minute ‘till you fly
This is the part where you get a peek into the studio creation process of the song…
This is a creative writing exercise. And it’s one that has created much of my lyrical content, and honed my lyric writing craft more than any other exercise. And you can do it too. It’s called Object Writing. Today, you will show, not tell.
Pick a subject. Anything you want to write about. But be specific. Perhaps a memory of you siting on the swing in your grandma’s front yard. Or a beautiful day swimming in the ocean. Or a pepper shaker. Or a walk in the rain. You can use any of those examples if they sound fun.
You’ll fill the following pages with stream of thought describing that experience. There’s one rule. You can only describe using your senses. There are five standard senses – sight, smell, touch, taste, and sound. We’ll add another two. Organic sense is your awareness of your inner body – your breathing, muscle tension, heartbeat, etc. Your kinesthetic sense is how you relate to the world around you – the world spinning when drunk, I’ll bang my head on the attic ceiling if I stand up straight, etc.
Using only language from these seven senses, you’ll describe the object or memory. You can deviate from the original subject and go anywhere, as long as you stick to sense-based writing.
The reason for this exercise is to develop your ability to show. If I write a song that says “I love you so much,” it doesn’t feel like anything. If I say “I won’t fight back, not against this swelling sound of music ringing in my ears, bringing me to tears. A beating drum is my heart when you’re around,” you feel it.
Don’t try to rhyme though. It’s cool if you do, but don’t let that limit you for this exercise. Get the hang of sense-based writing for the fun of it. You’ll introduce a world of color into your writing.
This exercise is called Object Writing (from Writing Better Lyrics by Pat Pattinson). He recommends that you do 10 minutes of it first thing in the morning, set to a timer. This gets the juices flowing through your day, and gets your creative brain begging for more action (“if only I had one more minute!”). It’s also very useful to do before writing verses to a song. The chorus tends to be more abstract – the main idea. The verses need to balance that out with sensory writing to put you in this world. I object write a few pages, underline what I like, then see if I can build lyrics around it.
Making your writing more sensory based will be one of the strongest exercises you can do for songwriting and prose. And it’s downright fun.
We’ll be climbing a mountain together…
Can you feel the fog drifting across your face?
We’re family now. Travelers together on the same trail.
We may be scattered all over the world, but this is where we meet and share our stories and emotions.
And I want to make sure you’re part of the conversation.
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I’m so excited to see you in there!
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